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Tuesday, November 10, 2009

A Writing Sample: 11yo

The assignment:
Use as many of the following spelling list words as possible
to write a fictional entry in your diary:
beenfeel
capturediary
brokehistory
deeddozen
exhaustsorry
inspectpear
practicecriticism
expectelse
votefifth
equipyesterday

Rated P.O. = Parent's Only
for contents that include violence.
Dearest Diary,

I feel inclined to write the history of a dear, dear friend of mine, whose name was Buck Smith. He was tall, strong and the bravest of the bunch. Yesterday, five men walked through the town dressed in black and struck the town with the edge of the sword. But Buck came to the rescue! They were no match for Buck Smith! BOOM! BANG! CRASH! SMACK! Those were the sounds of his mighty club. He felled four of them like logs, but the fifth got away to tell his master. That made Buck hero of the year. People all around the world said, “That dude is awesome!” And the people of the town said:
“Let us make him our leader! Let him protect the world!”
So, he practiced Kung Fu to the highest level! He did the same with sword, ax, bow and arrow, and club fighting. But an army of infinity bad guys came. They were too much for Buck, but he fought bravely. He sent them up in the air by the dozen! BOOM! BANG! CRASH! SMACK! But he could not expect to beat those bad dudes. “Pick on somebody else!” he said. But they were very naughty dudes and did not listen. Then they captured him. They chained him between two poles and whipped him 'til his mortal wounds were many. When he was exhausted, and when they stopped laughing at him, they piled wood and hay around him and lit it. Then they threw oil on the fire. It flew high. They heard a crack, and then a roar, and out of the fire came Buck, hot chains swirling. And that was the last time we saw the bad dudes and Buck Smith.

Sincerely,
Rip Van Javen

** Written in the Kung Fu Panda style by:




2 comments:

Jeanne said...

Hmm, that there dude is going to massacre his school class next. And you've never let him have either a toy gun nor a sword, right? Yeah, yeah.

(Chuckle!)

This is actually very fine work. Very fine indeed!! Just a little bit violent, right?

pebblekeeper said...

That is too awesome! Thanks for sharing the link! That made me smile. Yep. Two peas in a pod. Full of warriors. and Swords. :)

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